For Gohan, I agree with Bran. And maybe less shading on the neck wrap. Also, I believe his pants taper like Piccolo's and then show a thin line of ankle, not socks. Everything else is good though.
Raditz, definitely thin the eyes and make him look older and more evil. I will always hate those shoulder flaps that Bandai made, but whatever. You made his armor look much better than your USSTrunks, so that's good.
Naiz, I suppose his height is okay, but comparing him to Vegeta isn't a good example because they made Vegeta too tall. However, his long thighs make his lower legs way too short. I recommend you add some length to his lower legs, even if it makes him taller. Probably needs at least 1/2-3/4 of an inch. Face looks fine, but I recommend a more angry face than a happy face. Looks like he just got a new toy or something lol
Cell 2nd Form, looks pretty good. The big eyes Bandai gave him will work better for his 2nd Form. All I recommend on him is definitely make his forearms thicker and fists bigger.
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Those are fine, but if you look at Naiz's smile, it flattens and barely bends upward toward the middle of his lips, then back down. It's a very gradual and small difference, but really brings out his look. Look at Branjita's Burter to see what I mean, since Burter and Naiz have similar faces. His smile flattens out and doesn't curve the whole way, until it reaches his cheeks. Also, Raditz can just benefit from thinner eyes, from top to bottom.
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I get Raditz shins but arm look about right to me. Can you give a little more detail.
Well, when I bend my elbow all the way, I can easily reach the top of my shoulder with my fingers. Your Raditz can't even touch the top of his bicep if he were to articulated enough to do that, so that's why it looks too short to me. For legs, I figure if I can kick my own butt with my heels in real life, then that's how legs should be proportioned too, so the shins appear too short.
I'm not sure what you used, but given the strange proportions of how those arms are looking, I'm guessing Goku upper arms and Krillin forearms? If those are just Goku arms, I've never noticed how short his forearms are, but it's really noticeable because of the forearm armor being so short and stocky.
As far as Raditz's height is concerned, in the anime he is approximately Piccolo's height, which during that saga, would mean he is about Tien's height more or less. I don't know how you have him sized right now, but he should be taller than Figuarts Goku to be a good representation of Raditz.
Raditz . Idk what's missing on him so ant advice is welcome. Btw he's wider then piccolo . Armor is completely sculpted
Looking good, so far. Though, you've forgotten to add his bands, to the left thigh and bicep. His hairline could be made lower. As of now he has a billboard for a forehead. You could also repositioned his head, as it is seated a little bit too high on the neck. Maybe try and drop it down ever so slightly, as he currently looks like a Ninja Turtle - in a bad way. Also, the boots and gloves are missing the ridge that runs vertically through the centre. Fix those things and he should be good.
Also, I've been meaning to mention to you; that you should look into becoming more intimate with the human body, in particular its musculature. Currently your muscles are looking like bloated cookie dough and lack proper form and definition. You have the technical ability down pat, but your overall lack of anatomy is holding you back from achieving the results you are truly capable of. Food for thought.
Branjita I see. But no it's goku. But it dose look short for some reason . Thanks for the help. Also Adrenaline
vedreta thanks man. I'm liking cell so far. He was difficult poposbrother took gotcha @supremekai dbz has strang parts like legs . But thanks will be sure to do. So they do not look like that. The ridges are there. There on the sides. As for the head. I didn't have it all the way on. Yep supremkai I'm just bad at everything. Thanks for the advice
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Post by SupremeKai on Oct 17, 2014 20:55:46 GMT -6
Actually, for the most part, DBZ's musculature and overall anatomy is surprisingly accurate. Grossly sensationalised, yes. But there is still an element that is remarkably grounded in reality. It is clearly apparent, Toriyama, at the very least has a working understanding of the human anatomy. Obviously, being an animation the muscles are often only defined by bold black lines - but that doesn't mean they don't have contour and lack proper form.
Just look at SHF Broly's musculature, for instance:
You can clearly recognise and identify the specific muscle groups, just by the shape and contour of each segment. Notice how the abdominals aren't simple smooth kidney bean-shaped lumps protruding from his abdomen.
To say that DBZ lacks proper anatomy just sounds like a convenient and lazy excuse. Be better than pressing a line into a wad of clay and calling it a quadricep. Brushing off my advice only serves to stunt your own personal development. So, take it or leave it.
Post by SupremeKai on Oct 17, 2014 22:22:15 GMT -6
^ See this type of crap right here is why you find yourself getting bagged out so much. Your complete unwillingness to accept advice and recognize genuine criticisms on their merit, instead choosing to be a indifferent imbecile. We both know that wasn't the point I was making at all. I was merely offering you good sound advice, based upon what I identified was clearly lacking in your current work - and you took it way too personally.
I really am going to have to agree with you there, you really are "no good at all". You know what!? I don't forgive you for "being so bad" and "lazy" - because you have the ability to be so much better, but sadly you choose to be mediocre instead.
So, to you now I must ask this question; what is the point of this thread if you are clearly not willing to hear our opinions - did you not just ask us for your advice? You can't seriously expect to grow from it all if you keep excluding all advice you deem negative.
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Huh I so take people's advice. I ask for it above. I also thank people for the help. Really let me ask you this. What do you know about my work or what I do. Do you make customs? I find everything you say not to be advice. Your just truly a insulting person. You do nothing but insult me . You try to cover it up but you do. Really I do far more then you think I do. You have no right to put down my work or me. I'm happy to take advice. But I don't insult you . I don't see what your big problem is. You have not took the time to read anything on the or my last thread. I'm happy to get help. But not from someone who puts down others just to make there self feel good. You have such a problem with my work. Why don't you stop looking at it, I don't ask you to buy my work. I'm getting better just not all in a rush. I really don't like drama. I don't see why you keep trying to start stuff. I have done nothing to you. I'm living my life and doing what I love. I have had it with people like you so please go ahead with your friends and talk about someone behind there back that hasn't done a thing to you.
Really I been taking advice.i never claim to be good. I think I'm very humble. But this dosnt seem to be good enough for people on this site. I seen all the bad stuff about me. Really I'm not a rude guy. I do my work because I love it. I don't bother anyone. Really would everyone prefer me just to go? I really have no problem with it. I can see if I was mean but I'm not. I never even ask anyone to buy my work. So would everyone prefer I leave? If I do will you guys stop watching my ebay and being angry at what my stuff sales for? Will I be left a lot. Because why am I so hated? Really what have I done to you? Or anyone.this is getting really annoying. I don't talk down to people. So why is it everyone has a problem with me. I do tones of customs. I may use a few but people use a few of mine. Do I ever say I. Better then anyone else?
oh and this includes Mods. I know you guys have really big hate for me. So let me know if you want me gone. I won't dislike anyone. Just let me know
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